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©2008-2009 ~Fusyon
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Grayish.

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:iconsemeuse:
it's an interesting approach, but I don't think it really works - the bald sky can impart a feeling of oppressiveness and I like the way it fades across the image, but the lack of detail or at least differentiation in the hills makes it seem more like a Rorschach test, except for the power-line towers which are the only point of focus and don't seem to fit

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what's the ugliest part of your body? I think it's your mind

see my "words in progress" [link]
:iconfusyon:
Really appreciated your analysis, I may say it was the first critique, ever, I receied in DA. :)
I do have to agree with you and your commentary made me acknowledge this photograph from a different point of view (the power-line towers that don't really fit), besides my camera can't be the only responsible for this "lack of quality"...

Again, thank you.

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*sigh* @ [link]
:iconsemeuse:
I think it is important, especially when the artist requests an advanced critique, to help out and really comment on the work - a comment like "this is great" doesn't help very much (though it is nice to hear ;)) - at any rate, I'm glad it helped you out

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what's the ugliest part of your body? I think it's your mind

see my "words in progress" [link]

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January 28, 2008
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Jan 26, 2008, 5:00:48 PM

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